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Awesome!!!! Harry is strong and Snape too. Can't wait for more!!

I loved how quickly the two became brothers, you could blame it on Veela instincts or something, the whole sibling rivalry bit was smart, it added character and understanding, so far a great story, hope to see your update soon.

I enjoyed the first version of this immensely and am anxiously awaiting the new draft. I rarely review any stories unless I truly enjoy them. I enjoyed the way the fight between Ronnikins and Draco went this time. I also enjoyed that we had more of a Narcissa reaction to the news and how she was with Draco after learning about Harry. Now we can truly see her madness. The part about adding in Grimauld a second time made the story better than just having Harry waking up at Malfoy Manor being forlorn and dejected.

Anxiously awaiting the next installment. But I have one final question, will Harry know immediately that Severus is his mate or will he know when his veela inheritance finally emerges?
-Drizzt

Nice can't wait for more, I read the other one so I can't wait to see the different things our going to do now !!!!!!! see you soon !!!

Great story! An incubus would be great. Vampire Snape is also great, but there are to many.

Awesome!! Almost better then the other one! Keep them coming please!!!! 😸

So use your author name and make him a blade of the shadows. The ultimate of the shadow masters, a blade is a swordsman who wields a sward with accuracy that most could not. So a Shadow Blade would be the group of shadow demons that use the shadows for more than movement, they command them for what ever they want. Hence the reason Snape lives in the dungeons or shadows. You could even see how many would comment on the similarities between his creature and your name. Just think about the possibilities on what a shadow could do if commanded. A Shadow Blade could be the only one that can make the shadows solid so they can hold down people or tie them up.

I'm really loving this story and there is only one chapter. I do love the idea of hermione and Draco together.

really, really great please update soon.

I really liked DNA Mishap. But I am looking forward to A Life Never Lived. Please update soon.