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for The Perfect Summer

by harrypegger

schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is my favorite story of yours followed by An Odd Crush not too fond of the other two but keep up the great work!!!!!
person Sarzie12
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Never reviewed a story before so not entirely sure what to write lol. I completely adore your fic, please please continue to write more of it!! :D Can't wait for the next installment.
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice, keep it going.
person johnny2by4
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
really liking the story so far. its got potential and i hope you continue it.
person Fan
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. You've got a great style and I love this almost innocent exploration of relationships and sexuality that Harry and Hermione have.
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Quite excellent work so far. I'm sure I'm not the only one who's enjoying it. I like that you don't have them skipping directly to sex. You also don't make things too convenient for them or too intuitive for the teens. Now just one quick note: at least in canon, Harry would be 12 at this point in time. If you've decided to inflate their ages a little, that's fine with me, but I just wanted to point that out (lest Harry accidentally turn 14 prior to 3rd year).
person Robert Cox
schedule July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice you have they acting as kids yet the touch of young adult
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the way this is shaping up. I look forward to reading more.
person brazilanana
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
" An Odd Crush" is much better.Hopefully you won't go the way of other Harry/Pansy fics by publishing one or two intriguing chapters, and then abandoning it .
person brazilanana
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry and Hermione is so boring.