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for The Perfect Summer

by harrypegger

person 2CRsgt
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. What ages are they supposed to be? How will they keep this up (Harry will) at school? Will others join in? Luna and Ginny come to mind, not to crazy about Ron. Maybe Hermione would like to try Nevill on for size. Ron would never want to share, he's too jealus and petty.
person Emily
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Best fit I've read on this site in ages. Can you have hermione measure harry? Maybe a little shorter then his wand? :P lol
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hermione,you think you're brilliant? You can't even do two things at once,without a book.
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Of course Harry was going to have sex with her
person brazilanana
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No more "An Odd Crush" ?No more Harry/ Pansy? Ok, i understant.
The Perfect Summer is much popular .
person Thedude
schedule July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I prefer your Harry/Pansy Story...#Justsayin
person red demon
schedule July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love how Harry and Hermione are exploring sex with each other.
person joe
schedule July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like what you are doing with this story
person dest
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story so far. Even with how fast you're updating it doesn't feel like enough. Can't wait for more. Wasn't expecting any smut this chapter, so that was a nice surprise.
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Again, very good. I particularly like the way you're kinda having Harry & Hermione take their explorations in 'baby steps', so to speak. The only thing I'll say is that I really would rather this not end up with a pregnancy, that's been done to death, and Hermione at least would be far too intelligent to risk it. Perhaps a timeskip to after school when it would be better, but I'll not tell you how to write your fic, just a thought.^_^