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I love the story and your writing

Awesome!!! I'm glad it was Nasta!!!!

I love your story and I love all your stories. They are what I look forward to when coming on this website. Your writings inspired me to write my own stories and it help when release stress and extra energy. I think you are an awesome author and no one has the right to tell you different,

discount my review for this chapter last time i forgot that draco would die because he was on the potion so so awesome love the paring i kinda would have love to see blaise with them or arsenio but amazing

Again I went looking for a small story before bed and found you had updated!
I can say that I squealed, actually squealed, when I saw Nasta! I love you!!! You made my week! I can't wait for the rest!
I am a bit sad about poor Richard, I liked him!
I also was upset about Henley, poor baby dom! I hope he'll find a mate soon!

Sad part is that I would have love for Harry to still have had blaise I do hope Henley get a mate in poor anbell her babies will be sold all I can say I harry should have all. His mates plus myron Richard nasta blaise and draco S well as arsenio but that become a harem so love the real Rotd and things one and scale it but I thi k blaise would have rocked as well as draco just no maxs narrate that their was know right hard but spillover my and nas

loved it !!!!

I just want to first say how much I normally dislike leaving a review. I never feel I have said what I wanted to say and usually figure someone has better things to do than read my horrid attempt at flattery so please believe me when I say that you are amazing. There are so very few writers that are true WRITERS in this day and age, let alone on this website or it's cousins, that can weave such a story of complexity, realism and the ability to whir someone's emotions into a maelstrom.

You deserve every single glowing review you receive and may they never reach their end in giving you the appreciation that your imagination deserves. You have made family trees, diagrams and created an entire universe of characters!

Thank you for not making this story all about Harry, for bringing together so many different characters so flawlessly and making me want to learn about different stories I had never before given the time of day just so that I could read your other works. Anita Blake's story and I have been longtime friends but I have always skipped over The Hobbit or The Lord of the Rings for the sheer fact of it's hype...you have very soundly proved me wrong.

But mainly I do want to commend you for having a story, nigh several, addictive enough to glue my butt to my chair and read it from beginning to end after a friend of mine gave you what I can only call an uncharacteristically high amount of praise. That has not happened since the conception of Nimbus Llewelyn's Child of the Storm.

Thank you for keeping everyone as human or Dracken-esque as their natures tend to be and may all your future writing endeavors be as amazingly well received as this.

Oh, and for those who think that 'constructive criticism' is synonymous with 'flame' merely remember this: May the fleas of a thousand camels nest in their genitalia and may their arms be too short to scratch.

Blessed Be.

I know that this Will be myron and nasta harry but kinda wanted richard to that way harry has three mates and Ashleigh mated someone else

Seriously i love the original version but I need more of this one. Your stories are awesome! Please post more soon!