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by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter with Scopius being the most adorable child ever. Looks like maybe Draco is at least a little smitten himself.
person Jester
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was so adorable.... both Scorpius
and Harry looking at the Malfoys.
I was screaming Draco POV while reading, because I was
so curious to know what Draco is thinking.
person staar
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
still can't believe that Ron didn't go nuts on Harry for changes jobs.....Sorp is cute cute he want Harry in his life one way or the other .....Draco and Harry really have a lot to go, for them to get along...thanks for the update !!!!
person Jester
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Well I see I might have no idea about children myself. I feel
as lost as Draco what Scorpius wants.. Glad that Hatty is there to help
person butterpie
schedule November 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Life never stops moving forward, does it ? Harry finally has his new purpose ready to launch full sail ahead and now Scorpius is acting up again. The kid is probably doing what all children do to their parents and is testing his fathers' limits, patience and love. My mom often said, " when you have children of your own is when you will understand what we went through raising you and your brothers and sisters", there were nine of us all told- lol! Just one night alone sitting up with a sick child gives you an idea that parenthood is never easy, and in my mind it is the hardest job in the world. That being said all my nieces, nephews, and even some cousins came to me often for advice, or even just someone to listen to their problems. I often listen, but have managed to steer them back to their parents who were told by me to give their children the gift of their time, which is worth more than money or anything else that could be bought. Children grow so fast and one day you'll realize just how much you missed out on because you were too busy to just be there for them. Hopefully Harry can bridge the gap between Draco and Scorpius. He is needed there desperately. Draco needs him to stop over analyzing the situation with his son and just let him be a child first and build a level of love and trust before his expectations get out of hand. Scorpius needs to feel secure before his tantrums become a hard to break habit. As I see it Harry is the best person for the job here as both respect him and will listen to him. So go Harry!
person Meechypoo
schedule November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So Draco bites the bullet and writes Harry for advice, this time openly knowing it's Harry he's asking. Love Harry's idea for helping families and now he's using his very large heart to even help Draco, or Scorpius as he so claims, even though he doesn't have to.

~~ Meechy
person delia cerrano
schedule November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now Harry's on a good track. And that Scorpius is just the best part of the story next to Draco and Harry finding each other.
person Marron
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love Theo! He's going to be great to Draco. What a smart man he is. My, my.
And poor Harry. Can't decide what to do and People just won't let him work it our on his own.
Things are ging to be interesting . Especially because Draco now wonders about Harry bedroom skills. YEAH!
person staar
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow Harry needs a lot of help here ...hope the boys can help him out.....really good can't wait for more !!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No mpreg in this story...rats! Do they do blood adoptions? I just feel sooo bad for Harry who wants a blood child so badly.
Scorpius is just sooo crazy adorable dirty fingers in his mouth and all. I think Draco is ready or nearly for Harry but I guess Harry has to settle a bit more and relax before he will be ready to give Draco and himself a chance to get together. Draco, Scorpius and I will be waiting.