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by Lomonaaeren

person moodysavage
schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked how you had Harry describe his relatives. It didn't go extreme on the harsh side and you didn't add a bunch that wasn't in the books to make it seem worse. Harry was very matter of fact and to the point without getting into any insults or judgments about his relatives and I think that perfectly fits what Harry would be like in this situation. I think you have such a great understanding of how Harry would realistically react in situations. Awesomely done.
person staar
schedule December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Scorpius is so cute , just like his dad...both so happy that Harry is coming over !!!!!! ???? to bad that Harry can't get preg's so he can have a kid ....Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's late and I don't have anything to say about this chapter except I'm still annoyed that Harry is so stuck on blood children. Probably for the most part because I have two adopted sons and one biological son. I love them all and couldn't stand losing any. I am following this story mostly because I love Draco/Harry and am crazy about adorable Scorpius. Teddy also though he seems a little mean sometimes...probably because he is a bit older and been out in the world a bit already.
person Meechypoo
schedule December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hooray fornharry for actually sticking to his guns and starting his business! It will go far to help him deal with his loss of family. And kudos for realizing that he too needs help with his insecurities due to his inability to have his own children. Andromeda is being a little harsh withndrsco. First she's all for reconciling and then she wants Draco to stay out of Harry's life. She can't have Draco and Scorpius in hers and Teddy's lives and not expect overlap with Harry. I guess she's still hurting over Harry's misunderstanding about "family" time.

~~ Meechy
person Jester
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww I had wished Draco would know how to get rid of the portrait!

How about after the second family meal ;)?
person delia cerrano
schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm still in morning about Harry's inability to have children. Can he blood adopt Scorpius if Draco and Harry get together?
person staar
schedule December 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
fell for Draco a bit , his kid is so spoiled but that's his fault !! Well at lease Harry left his job, hope he starts now what he wants to do .....thanks for the update
person delia cerrano
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Progress! "Uncle Harry" seems natural to both Scorpius and Draco now. Greedy little guy...must be the Malfoy genes...he's after the Grimmald property. Good that Harry is thinking of leaving it to both of them...not forgeting his godson now that it seems he has the younger boy in his life probably permanently. Blaise sure puts some bad ways to handle muggles in Scorpius'
mind. Looks like he really likes his Uncle Blaise...zoo, muggle baiting, nothing can hurt him while he's with his Uncle.
person Jester
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First family meal!
They should just move in together ;)
person SP777
schedule November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #25...

My Goodness! The Malfoy Double Whammy! :-)

If Draco EVER gets wind of that, he would use it as ammunition to
get what he wants.