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by Lomonaaeren

schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely post!
person delia cerrano
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Still with you. Still don't like how Harry is so confused? hurt over his inability & Ginny? Unsure of himself? Do like that Harry & Draco are begining to develop a good relationship. Is Scorpius during into a brat? He seems awful full of himself.
person SP777
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #37..

Hopefully Lucius can help against that 'woman'!
...and that's some Slytherin thinking for Harry to do towards the end.
person Meechypoo
schedule February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So Harry is about to expose one of his most personal secrets in the hopes that more people will better understand why he wants to help children. Draco and his friends will stand by him, but the masses don't always react as we want. Most will understand but those like Quillona will use it as a perverted way of him wanting their children since he can't have his own. I have a feeling Draco will be using his information after all!

Loved the fact that Harry dragged Draco across the table to kiss him...so hot!

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule February 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly, no! I have not gone through being cursed and having my memory demanded of me by
a creepy shopkeeper, followed by a tour of a luxurious Manor. I must not be living right

Oh my Gawd! LMFAOOO!!! Oh you got jokes now I see. :-)
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about #36...

This is the most sweetest thing to read. Of course the men would roll their eyes if someone
called their interlude 'sweet', but it was. :-)

They're off to a good start so far.
person Meechypoo
schedule February 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So Harry and Draco got through a tough discussion about their failed marriages without truly fighting and shared their first kiss. I don't think Draco was quite ready for the true amount of passion that lurks beneath Harry's exterior. Even Harry probably forgot how that felt, s kudos to the both of the them.

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #35...

Well, hope Draco can come up with a convincing argument to let Harry see it
his way. *wink..wink**nudge..nudge*

Also, This sounds like a scenario you may have gone thru..

...AND what in the world happened to 'Light of the Life'? Is it in the fanfiction graveyard?
schedule January 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
og this is still awsome, I really like it !
person pokegirl1005
schedule January 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I'm loving this fanfiction so much!! When would the lemons start??? XD
person delia cerrano
schedule January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now the story is starting to get deep on their personal level...good. I'm ready for some personal revelations or some honest talking about what they feel for each other and what path they want their strange relationship to take from this point.