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for Starfall

by Lomonaaeren

person Jester
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes thats a nice way to reach Harry (without knowing). And I thought owlpost was
always amazing. The way Draco uses the owl reminds me a bit of bottle messages .
Just a lot more effectiv. I look forward to see how Harry answers his plea and
how he starts to help the help
person SP777
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #5..

What an unruly child....that screaming wouldn't have lasted 5 minutes with
the women in charge in my family .

..and that's a clever idea regarding the owl.
person Marron
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, horrible child. But nice chapter.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see how Harry replies!! I hope`all goes well with you so you can update quickly.
person Jester
schedule June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry... I know that even if you do not want to have kids, the fact that
you could not even if you wanted is hard, but if it is one of your dreams, it
must be outright horrible.
I wonder how Draco gets to know Startfall and look forward to more. Love it.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So good...no more Ginny whose always so thoughtless and selfish. Yea! Now we get to meet Draco! I can't imagine how he fits in...a psychiatrist? Draco has a way for Harry to have children? He's a publisher and wants to publish Ethan Starfall stories? He is using the name Ethan Starfall so no one realizes he is former deatheater Draco Malfoy?
person SP777
schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Well damn, it feels like you took a pair of scissors and cut the rest of the page off. :-p
person BAFan
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2

OMG. Is Ginny already pregnant??? Is that why she's rushing it? Okay, on to Chapter 3; maybe it will answer that question.
person BAFan
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3

Well, I'm glad to find out that Ginny didn't cheat on Harry and isn't already pregnant, but she is definitely not being supportive of Harry right now. And vice versa, I suppose, but honestly I think Ginny is more in the wrong here, although little purpose is served by apportioning blame.

I think this fic will generate as much discussion as "Marathon" did and I look forward to the next update!
schedule June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didn't realise there was another new story of yours!

I think that Ginny is being a little unreasonable here, I understand the part about wanting to celebrate life after such an unfortunate situation, but she is smacking Harry right in his face when he had just suffered a major blow