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by Lomonaaeren

person Jester
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am very sure about the trouble yes.
Its so sad that Draco is so mad at Ethan even though its
his own fault that the situation is as it is.
Well Harry will regret a lot at first too.
Hope the warlocks wont be a problem.
person SP777
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #10..

Maaan, I hope Draco knows what he's getting into dealing with such shady characters.
person Jester
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well... I am looking forward to how Draco will find Harry.
And him figuring out who Starfall is.
I am sure Harry and Scorpius on the other hand will like
each other just well enough!
person moodysavage
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Did Draco go off the deep end? He is so mad on his imagined insult by Ethan that he is ok with possibly having someone killed? That would take a father away from his wife and children which would be a totally cold blooded thing to do.to be that extreme would mean that he hasn't changed much from the vindictive child who tried to get buckbeak killed.I think he is in for a shock when he takes a good look at himself.
person SP777
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

That darn brat...and I'm talking about Draco. Having a hissy fit because people
are trying to get thru to him or tell him things he doesn't want to hear.

Well he deserves to be taking down a peg or two...and I hope Harry does it.
person Marron
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My GOD! Draco is as stubborn as a dozen donkeys. And now he was anew fixation. That smells of trouble. But interesting trouble.
person eros
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far so good, I really like how this is working out really cause it is believable However i am rather interested to see when your going to actually get them together if at all really
person Marron
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A dog with it's bone. I thinks that is a fitting discribtion for Draco.
Nice chapter.
person Jester
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh well Harry gets himself deeper and deeper in this mess
that will definitivly hurt a great deal when it comes out.
Still I am glad that they do not stop. And that you do not
stop writing this. Thanks~
person delia cerrano
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story getting even better now that Draco is trying to figure out more about Ethan and the real reason why he is writing, what he wants from Draco. You could always change your mind & let Lucius/Hermione find a way for Harry to a baby. After all what is magic or fantasy for except for creating happiness? And Scorpius (who is an adorable urchin) is a little boy not even a toddler any more. However I will be reading even if Harry doesn't get to have the joy of a baby some way.