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for Starfall

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Reading...enjoying. Dracos' parents are not truly helpful are they? They seem more like they want to keep Scorpius permanently and raise him. Harry and Draco both seem wounded and in need of someone to believe in them...give them some self confidence. They are so prickly with each other especially Harry but they could lean on each other and get the love they both
seem to be lacking.
person clau
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry isn't at his best at work since Ethan got revealed. He lets himself be sweaped into discussions about his personal problems and fails to engage the Dark Snake into a conversation where he has him spilling the beans about associates and locations, like Kinglsey wanted. He even give this criminal the satisfaction of more insights into his private life by answering him when he's about to get out of the interogation room when it already is clear he screwed the interview up and he wouldn't get anything from Gaylord. Harry's getting sloppy.
person SP777
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about 17...

My, my..and WHO was the fire breathing dragon and the 'innocent' lamb in this
chapter? :-) I'm glad Draco is showing restraint here for the sake of family.

Now, to get Harry on board...
person delia cerrano
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good. Now they are in the same country and talking...sort of...sporatically. I'm anxious to read about Harry meeting Scorpius with Draco. Draco hasn't caught on to how very deeply alone Harry feels. Also rejected by the way Ginny handled things and everyone else having their own family lives while he is in a job he is less than happy with and no happy home to go to.
person SParker
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #16...

I liked this..it was an honest-to-goodness straight forward [one-sided] conversation, with
no loopholes, trickery and, Merlin help me, no befuddlement involved.

Quick, clean & simple.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now we're getting to it. Teddy's getting better and Draco found out about Starfall. But Harry says "done" and walks out? Come on Draco you know you don't want to leave it at that!
person SParker
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #15...

1. You know there has to be a story you can make out of the excessive uses of blood magic
and how it can go to far.

2. Glad little bit [don't know his name still] is doing well & there are two videos on
Youtube that you may enjoy a. Parrot singing Bodies hit the floor and b. 'Larry the Parrot dials
an imaginary number' [this one is AMAZING]. Enjoy!

3. Hmm Draco may have asked Harry about Ethan Starfall, but he left a loophole...Harry isn't obligated to
explain what caused the creation, he could simply say 'He came from the top of my head'
person delia cerrano
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally got to catch up with this story. Really enjoying it. Very much like these versions of Draco and Harry and how they are working there way toward each other. Hope Draco didn't go out with Theo's friend yet. He needs to save it for Harry.
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's good but wen is the real action starting
person SParker
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #14...

1. Lol...Harry and that bird! By the way, how's yours?

2. I hope Draco is seeing some type of light, because his stubbornness is astounding.