rate_review Reviews

Interesting mystery with the bludger, one wonders if something nefarious is going on.

I love how you write Lucius; even when he's a jerk he's so smooth about it, and family is ALWAYS first.
Eventually Hermione will fully realize she's family now. I think she took a step that direction.

I think Narcissa is more fun to write (and read!) when she's a grandmother... ;)

Thanks so much for writing.

haha! I'm glad you liked the long review and will keep that in mind. Unfortunately on that note this likely won't be, as I am very tired. *pouts*

Little minor oopsie: "Father

Blast it all, Ginny! Things were going so Well and you had to go and juvenile it all to the toilet.

Thank goodness for Luna...
Booyaka! More Luna!

And yes, despite the oddness of the dance/conversation between Hermione and Lucius I DO think it was going well. Civil is well between those two at that moment.

What? Only Brides can have fits when someone messes up their Wedding Day? I see no fault in Draco flipping out about Ginny's poor form. Although he Did go a bit overboard and perhaps a Little more juvenile than he should... but I've seen brides respond far worse over FAR less so if I'm going to be gender-fair at all he certainly had the right.

I really enjoyed Hermione laying down the facts about Voldemort even if I think she was a little rose-colored-glasses as far as Dumbledore's part in Harry's Martyrdom. All the emotions from the Malfoys there... *fans self* wonderful. Add in seeing Lucius humanized -perfect. There's hope for a full family togetherness yet.

Loved how it was Lucius throwing out how to heal Hermione's parents. I love how you're showing him so intelligent. Not to mention his own brand of caring.

Thanks so much for writing!

I'm very glad you decided to make it longer.
This story is in my opinion very good.
If it were a book I wouldn't be able to put it down.
I'm also very excited to find out what will happen
With Hermione's parents.

And as always I'm looking forward to the next chapter

wow. Tears and laughter. Perfect wedding. And as usual for Luna... she nails it simply with understated grace. Go Luna.

Thanks so much for writing.

These chapters can't come any sooner?
I'm seriously addicted to this story and
I really can't wait for the next chapter!

For being so tired Draco really did a wonderful job of countering Andromeda's words/Hermione's stubborn fears.

Ouch. Seems no matter What the full story is with Andromeda, it doesn't look like there will be reconciliation with her sister any time soon. Shame, really.

I like how Narcissa seems to be honestly warming to Hermione.

Thanks so much for writing.

OMG... Love the story, obviously. However was very disappointed with the fact I stayed up till four in the morning to finish the story and discovered that the end had not been written yet. On the other hand was a great read and I hope you finish it soon.

What? No warning to consummate the marriage asap? That's what I was expecting. In there somewhere at least.

Thanks for writing.