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for When Duty Calls

by Astrid-Lemons

person MrsStockwell
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hate interruptions. I hope that once Snape figures out who has the gall to interrupt them that he hexes them to oblivion. In other news.. I love this story. I love that Hermione is no longer afraid of messing up so she has come out of her shell and is a total badass. But I especially love the smut-tastic scene we were just given. Such a power couple.
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi. What a cruel place to stop! lol I am glad you found my words to be a boost to you. And, may I say, I was right! That was perfect, from the initial contact to the slow build up to the almost-explosion. I don't know who's at the door, but I hope they aren't hexed too badly. lol Thanks! HG4eva
person Heaven
schedule May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohhoho! :-) Miss Hermione Badass Granger? :-D Snape really got the wrong side of her.
schedule May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A noob? lol I can't see it. Your writing it fun, flirty and fantastic. So, stick with what you know and it will be just fine, I am sure. :-) I am enjoying your smart, sassy Hermione and snarky, but less than completely assholic Severus. When he jumped in front of her to berate Remus, I laughed out loud. This is really fun, so far. Thank you!! HG4eva
person tkr
schedule May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. I hope you will let Severus win their little war sometimes. Love Severus while I only tolerate Miss Know it All & Show it Off.
person Emory
schedule May 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the sound of this fic! You've set it up amazingly, can't wait for the next chapter. :)