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person AidaLily
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like how Harry and Ron are getting along and how Ron stated they should stop depending so much on Harry. I think Harry's reactions of feeling guilty for being happy are nicely done. The fact that he seemed to feel a little bit lighter was quite nice.

Now as for the bad guy, I hope Harry will at least tell Draco that he is going to meet with this person from the Rising Cobras or something. I can only imagine Draco would feel hurt if Harry said nothing to him about it.
person staar
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
New reader !!!!! so good , cam't wait for more !!!!!
person moon
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love it as usual. I'd been hoping you would write a story like this for a long time now. It's just greatness.
person BAFan
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19

When I said their happiness wouldn't last long, I meant that I was sure you'd toss some kind of spanner - hopefully not a permanent one - into the relationship. 'Cause that's what you authors love to do. ;-)

Another good chapter. So happy that Ron and Hermione are starting to come back into their own. Hopefully George can follow suit before long.

"...Apparently, besides weather, time of day, how well you knew them, degree of blood relation, and how formal the occasion was, it also depended on how recently they
person AidaLily
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really really just love this story. I think that kiss at the end with Draco asking for a walk was so cute. I am glad that Harry can trust Draco and vice versa. I love that Harry is noticing things about Draco that he could fall easily in love with. I think it is beautiful. Don't worry so much about the time between the updates. I am just happy you update this story when you can. It always brings a bit of smile to my face to read their interactions with one another.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person SP777
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #20..

person delia cerrano
schedule September 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really curious what this former Risen Cobra will say is their problem with Harry. The war is well over and Harry doesn't seem to be bothering anyone so what do they think he has done or is doing? I'm very glad that Draco and Harry are getting closer.
I vote against threesomes though. How can you love someone and share them intimately with someone else? Ick. Scorpius is sooo adorable!
person BAFan
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19

Such a lovely image with which to end the chapter! I wish I wasn't positive that their happiness won't last long. :-)
person SParker
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #19...

Fangirl sigh...with stars in the eyes. I bet Draco wanted to kiss harry under the rose bush
all day as a request. :-)

Maybe later on they could take a stroll to a gazebo. Do Malfoys have gazebos? Would be strange...
person AidaLily
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Yes. At least Draco is making Harry think about his actions. Thank goodness for that!
I really enjoyed the chapter and I like how Draco points these things out to him. I think it is good for Harry to hear something in calm and simple common sense. Harry needs some common sense! :) Scorpius was so cute in this chapter when he was telling on Harry for being about to use the Floo Network. Can't wait for the next update. This is one of my favorites of yours!