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person moon
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I meant "a story like this" in regards to older Harry and Draco who have a tender romance. You write stories with romance of course but it seldom feels gentle, shy and tender. I don't think that counts as fluff since you have so many other elements in your stories. You just write too seriously for a while story to be classified as fluff. So for me, this is one of my favorites of yours. You did write a one shot a long while back that had similar character ages and circumstances that I loved as well. It just had the same flavor of a calm building romance between adult men who bond through their children. The reader could taste the affection there and there's no one strongly resisting it. It just grows in a beautiful way. Many of your romances seem to revolve around one sided feelings or one having to convince the other or deep resistance for a number of reasons. It just takes so long for the feelings to be accepted and for the relationship to begin to grow. I can't help but feel sorry for everyone involved because love can be magical. Okay enough of that. Now I feel shy. :) I love all of your work and am really looking forward to another one of your morbid/dark fics that you sometimes put out. I also admire that you write what you want, even if it's "different". You seen to spill out these amazing images that have been floating in your head. I enjoy every single one.
person Jester
schedule November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was quite delicious to read!
person Morgana
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
"And he hauled the no longer nameless, but still really unlucky, kid away with him."
That made me snort:) Even though he is kind of right. I mean Draco and Lucius are both rather nice names, but Scorpius?
person Morgana
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
MAybe my memory is a bit wonky. But I thought Draco was only kind of responsible for Dumbledore's death. Didn't Fred die during the final battle and not when Draco let the death eaters into the school?
person AidaLily
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot, but admittedly the end made me laugh a bit. I would have supported Harry killing Draco if Draco mentioned pureblood customs right after they just did all that. Lol. I loved the chapter and how close they had gotten. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person staar
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was so hot !!!!!! and you left it there !!!!!!!!!!!!! man now I have to wait for the next update to see all of harry's reaction to this !!!!! Thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!
person SP777
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #25..

I'm so glad you got the hint to do a wee bit more in the bedroom dept., because your sex scenes
come off erotic without being smutty, teasing with no depravation involved [I think you leave that
for the other section], etc..

Ever thought about doing a scene where it's a 'night on the town' that isn't just the simple dinner?
person BAFan
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25

Oh wow. This was just perfect. I loved the earlier scene with Hermione, and the way that Draco reacted to Harry's gift, and of course the bed scene, which was beautiful and hot and . . . just perfect!
person Jester
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my thats are soem sweet presents. I nearly thought he would
give Draco a snitch pendant, but there are probably to many negativ
memories on that one.
person staar
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok were are moving in the eighth direction here !!!!!!!! love it ...and everyone just needs to chill ok Harry can have a life for himself !!!!!!!! thanks for the update and see you !!!!!!