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about #28...

You know for a minute, I thought a proposal was going to happen.

Finally harry saw that he and Draco are going to be together for love not custom !!!! so good !!!!!!! can we find out who were the ones that are trying to kill Harry ? thanks for the update and see you soon again !!!:):):)

What a nice way to end a chapter. I guess George doesn't think anyone can love deeply or miss someone terribly unless they are a twin! Not so. Glad Harry let the aurors take care of the threat from the Risen Cobras and took care of his "family" instead. Progress!! As weoll progress foe Hermione and Ron in trying to reconnect with life and the reality of people being complicated not just good or bad...light or dark magic.

about #27..

Aww..I love those quiet moments between Harry & Draco and I'm glad you wrote about 'Harry telling
his history to Draco'. It's something I like seeing and I feel why not?

Also it's good to see Harry not charging into every battle and let someone else handle it.

I wonder if they got the guys that were attacking the house !!!! nice update thanks for it !!!!!

about #26..

1. Definitely loved the imagery of Harry crouched naked over Draco, in protective stance of course. :-)

2. I know some of your readers probably won't get it, but I understand where George is
coming from when he is trying to express to Harry that he 'lost his twin'. That's a bond
NO ONE understands, it's stronger than even fraternal twins, just mentioning the average
sibling connection, i.e brother & brother or brother/sister, sister/sister doesn't compare,
unless they are just joined at the hip.

I've seen identical twins who just did EVERYthing...play together, fight together, move in unison
together, complete each others sentences. It's uncanny..and fascinating.

Therefore, as frustrating as it is, to see George act this way, I get it and wish he WOULD go to
a Mind Healer anyway, if not that..talk Molly. After all, she's a mother who lost a son and I wonder if it ever
occurred to Harry to have Molly intervene and talk to her son.

..and I'll leave it there.

Ch. 26

So sad. I think George has been riding on the wagon of self-pity for so long he doesn't know how to get off of it. Worse, he doesn't *want* to get off. In fact, he embraces it; it's now a part of his persona. Maybe I'm being too hard on him, but declaring Harry to be the enemy and forbidding him even to enter the shop? Seriously? After all that Harry did for him?? For shame!

So I guess we'll be seeing the Weasleys clan's reactions to this development soon?

Okay, I can understand that George is still mourning and hurt, but at some point it's just stupid. Maybe a good slap to the face would help.
And George is the one who's the traitor. His grief is, of course, so much worse that nothing Harry went through could compare. Bastard.

Great chapter.

so sad that George think's that way...feel sorry for both of them , to end a friendship like that ........so apart from all the dark shits out their now harry has to deal with friends becoming enemys....sucks ok !!!!! well that for the update and see you soon !!!!!!

Not too play devils advocate here, but telling someone who fought in a war to "grow up" is the quickest way to burn any bridges and get your shit kicked in. War leaves scars and while Harry has dealt with his, not everyone heals as quickly. George's healing is going to take all the longer since every time he looks into a mirror he is going to see Fred. Perhaps if Harry had called the shop ahead of time and explained then things might have played out differently. He knows how George feels about Malfoy's and the lack of foresight is glaring. Granted the situation calls for them to be together to avoid being attacked, he DID promise George that he would not have to deal with Draco. It is true that Scorpius, who might I say is absolutely adorable, should not have to pay for his fathers mistakes. Makes it harsher since in canon Rowling has stated online that Scorpius would have had to deal with people not liking him due to his last name despite being nothing like his father was.

-waits patiently for next chapter-