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August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is literally one of the most beautiful stories I have seen yet. I'm really enjoying it in a way I haven't enjoyed a fanfic in awhile. The description of facial expressions and emotions is well detailed and thought out and I really commend you on how well written this is. Thank-you for letting us read this loveliness.
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August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this story! Everything just feels real as you read it...as if you're really one of the characters and feeling things as they do. It's wonderful! Also, I think George has feelings for Harry- he seems too concerned that he's not 'perfect' for Harry, knowing he's not well and still missing Fred like he does, it's seems like he wants to be better for Harry and he's mad at himself for not being better. It would also be another explanation for why he reacted so strongly to Harry being friends with Draco, besides not liking him, Draco would be competition for Harry's affections, especially since Draco's 'well.' Just my thoughts on it, probably not correct but I tend to read into people/ characters too deeply. :) Anyway, it's a GREAT story and I can't wait to read more!
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know he doesnt want that attantion or being superior, but the
way you wrote him being just made it sound sexy. :3
way you wrote him being just made it sound sexy. :3
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July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco seems so happy that are they are reaching another level of "friendly relationship"...visiting without the pretext of high toned manners or gifts. So am I. Maybe now they can start getting to a more than friendly basis...I hope, I hope.
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Right he would have to bring them, or stumble in on them while they visit Harry.
Like always I love Harry being superior and not letting it blow him up.
Like always I love Harry being superior and not letting it blow him up.
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July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12
Loved this chapter! The way Harry defended himself without even breaking into a sweat, I always like those. And the way he talked to Draco, really trying to understand him and help Draco understand *him* is heartwarming.
Loved this chapter! The way Harry defended himself without even breaking into a sweat, I always like those. And the way he talked to Draco, really trying to understand him and help Draco understand *him* is heartwarming.
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July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me like Draco and the relationship that Draco is trying to build with Harry even more. Lots of good "psychology" in this chapter ...in this story so far actually.
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July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #12..
Sounds like Draco wants to be a special, SPECIAL friend. :-p
Forget sounding like a mother hen, that sounds like an upset
boyfriend. :-)
Sounds like Draco wants to be a special, SPECIAL friend. :-p
Forget sounding like a mother hen, that sounds like an upset
boyfriend. :-)
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July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It always pains me to see read about George being so broken and without his twin.
That was one of the saddest parts in the books even if it was quite short...
The Twins are one of my favourite characters. Here I feel even more sad for him.
And still its frustrating to read about him being so stubborn.
Cant wait for the time when he at least likes Scorpius.
And Andromada is brilliant about the situation. It was quite funny.
That was one of the saddest parts in the books even if it was quite short...
The Twins are one of my favourite characters. Here I feel even more sad for him.
And still its frustrating to read about him being so stubborn.
Cant wait for the time when he at least likes Scorpius.
And Andromada is brilliant about the situation. It was quite funny.
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this so far, chapter 11 at this time. Hopefully more to come. I am wondering though about the hand holding that seemed to happen when they were Andromeda that didn't really fit from what you've been doing so far to look at it as a nice friendly holding of hands or a romantic one....