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about #3...

Maaaan, this is going to be an interesting year for the Malfoys. :-)
Harry doesn't have nightmares, does he? But, I see him too strong of an
individual to be laid low by one that deals with the war.

But, I have to admit this Harry in this story is VERY intriguing...and I must
admit I'm curious to see what would happen if he did snap at one of them.

On another note, the story Light of the Life, are you having beta problems? What's
going with that one?

Intriguing, can't wait to see where you're going with this.

Body guard? Good lie. But I don't know how the goblins will react with Harry leaving the walls of the Manor. The terms were to keep him behind those walls. Unless Mrs. Malfoy (or any of the three) know of a loophole, I'm still at a loss.
Very interesting sort none-the-less. How many chapters might this story be?

this is really interesting so far where is there promt from again I would love to see more ty

Will you be delving deeper into how exactly Harry acquired his new powers? It's rather peeving when Harry (or Draco) suddenly gets new magic without a plausible backstory of the acquisition.

about 2..

I get the feeling Harry is going to explode one day. I just hope he doesn't
tear the Manor down.

I think I know where you are leading this story to. The captivity, the slavery pretense and the volatile behavior of two members of the family is sure to trigger bad memories from childhood. This time though, his hope does not come from dreams of being rescued, but the real (and probably constant?) show of care Narcissa offers him. It's weird, but judging from the way Narcissa acts around Harry from her first appearance in chapter one til now, I'm guessing she knows (or suspects) a lot more about his childhood trauma than she lets on. She displays a longing to care for him beyond just getting along for one year. Oooor I'm reading too much into this.

I wonder how Hermione and Ron will play into this scenario. Will they be allowed secret visits or the Malfoys wouldn't risk it? How much does Harry's friends' hostility towards Malfoys remain and would it influence Harry's views of his "captors" much? What about the Weasley family?

Narcissa wishes for Harry to have some sort of occupation, but what about the Malfoys? What do they do now that the war is over? Harry had been training to be an Auror, but what about Draco? It would be interesting to see everyday life go on around Harry while his own agenda is on hold.

Again, always great reading your work!
Clau

Thank you very much for the new chapter! Love it!!!

Interesting start to an already unusual story. We would assume that Harry would be forgiven for the damage he caused to Gringotts, but I like this new take on the post-war world.
Can't wait to see these characters develop.

Yay thats an awesome beginning! I love that Harry is so powerful that he could break free, but thinks in long term to get his peace