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for The Long Defeat

by Lomonaaeren

person Jester
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is such an amazing woman. I love how you write her out
in this story more and more.
person SP777
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #11..

I think this is the first time I've seen you do a honest [..and long..] conversation
between Lucius & Narcissa...that showed how well they communicate as spouses. O_O
This was pretty good.

..and I hope Draco is slowly getting thru to Harry.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Draco (and I think Narcissa thought so too) that Harry should not leave the Wizarding World at the end of the year. Stay and make them see what they've done...lost their honor and any help from super wizard Harry in the future. He could work on getting even with the Goblins. Also he might try and relax and enjoy the year as much as possible. Use it to gather thoughts, make plans, get to know Malfoys and anybody he wants to get Draco to ask over or take him over to visit.
person Jester
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is so lovely. And Draco is really good at confusing himself.
And I am glad Harry found that book, whaterver it really did it seemed
to help a great deal.
person SP777
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #10


Leave it to Narcissa to be the one to give Harry something to think about. :-)
person HEARTSTAR
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice I love how you have the malfoys inter acting with Harry
person Jester
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like the best way to look at the future like that yeah, but maybe
Draco will give him other better options for his future ;)
Lovely chapter and lovely kiss
person BAFan
schedule July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

"Draco couldn
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They kissed! Oh sure, a half sham for now but this is sure to open new gateways to the heart. Though I do wonder how Draco's parents took that shock.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Quite a different and good plot that's working out very well. I like the slytherin way Draco is trying to work Harry over to his side.