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for The Long Defeat

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #14..

Why do I get the feeling Harry is going to go 'ballistic' one day & damn the consequences.
person Jester
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! He is finally learning to relax. Good job Draco and Narcissa!
The new rooms sound very, very lovely.
Thans for writing x3
person SP777
schedule August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #13...

This was a nice interlude. :-) I'm glad Harry got his own set of bedrooms, as a matter of fact,
I've always wanted to see Harry get his own rooms in the Malfoy Manor, whenever he stays there, during
one of your stories. Any chance of a balcony with those rooms?

..and it's good to see everyone acting mature.
person Victoria
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this!
person BAFan
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 13

person delia cerrano
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry seems to finally be settling in and accepting the idea that he can be happy and he doesn't owe his total being to
the public".
schedule August 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Such a chaste kiss, you're making my heart swoon!
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to say that I am really liking your story. I'm new to this website and I'm wondering if there is a way to get email updates for this story? I did finally figure out how to get it on my "reading" list. I read all the chapters Friday and Saturday and now I see another one is posted! So happy that you keep it updated! There was one on another site that I'm reading and its been MONTHS with no update.
person SP777
schedule August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #12..

I think I'm beginning to realize the true meaning behind the story title. :-)
person BAFan
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12

Yay, a breakthrough of sorts! I really like this portrayal of Narcissa.