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for The Long Defeat

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay an adult working on Harry's side to help him to alter his having to live as a slave etc. Harry and Draco need to have a talk about how powerful Harry's magic is and go more into how they feel about it.
person Jester
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That libary is damn useful and I applaud Hermione for that
spell she was using. That is quite a nice one!
I am looking forward how they can start to live a nicer life.
person SP777
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about 21..

Glad to see these two men get some of these cards on the table. Now it's time
for Harry & Draco to have their own heart-to-heart.
person staar
schedule October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok I have a ? why does everyone hate Harry now , after all je has done....I really don't get it...Draco's father well I get him he wants Draco with a woman to have kids but then why did he save Potter !!!!!!!!!! thanks for the update and see you soon !!!
person BAFan
schedule October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 21

Whoa. I think Lucius and Harry both handled that conversation well, all things considered. Lucius could have given an ultimatum (or tried to) and Harry could have either blown his top or succumbed to guilt. Kudos to them both for not doing that!

I think I found an error:

"'Then believe that I
person staar
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
and now after all this time they want Harry to go back to Ginny!!!! are they nuts or what and Ginny has not even written to him so what's wrong with this pic here thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!
person Jubbles
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is so brilliant. The injustice of all and how Draco behaves... I'm adoring this fic! Can you email me when you update? Thanks!
person staar
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yea well can't wait til he can get back at everyone.....they should al pay...and Draco well they will always think badly of him thanks for the update and see you soon again !!!!!
person SParker
schedule September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #19...

I don't know...but it feels like this strategy is going to blowup in their faces.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What an ugly thing they have to pretend! How can they ever be themselves in the wizarding world even after a year? They will be stuck with this unfair version of themselves for ever if someone doesn't find a way to kill them "to save the world from evil Malfoys and a crazy too powerful wizard who will turn dark and kill".