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for The Long Defeat

by Lomonaaeren

person staar
schedule November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
to me your making it really hard for Harry to stay ....everything that Harry had done for them all and this is how they treat him...me I would just leave the whole lot !!!!!!! Thanks for the update they real don't deserve harry at all.....
person BAFan
schedule November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 26

I kinda have to agree with Staar's review : why would Harry want to stay in a world that turns on him at the drop of a hat? Of course, he and Draco DID do a few things that would make the WW leery of him. . . .
person delia cerrano
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that chapter very much. I'm glad that Harry still has a lot of money after all he's in love with a Malfoy and I wouldn't want him to be in a lesser position or disadvantage in his relationship whatever it turns out to be.
person staar
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice so now they are both free to do what they want or what........./dracos' dad not to happy here with then being together...well love the update and lets see what happens next with them
person Jester
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good thing Lucuis wasnt part of the rescue group.
He probably would have a hearth attack from the kiss.
And I am corious if Draco is mad that he just spend all his fortune to save him.
person staar
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow is Harry now even with the Goblins ???? can't believe they took Draco...man and Harry gave all his vaults to them....great update can't wait for the next one !!!!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
But I don't want Harry penniless and giving so much. I like him filthy rich and very very powerful. I even hate him giving the space under the vaults to them! I know at least in Lucius eyes this means that Harry really values Draco and that Draco now has the upper hand since he has no money and no "under vaults" but still... I just don't like the Goblins beating Harry at all. (actually I like it best, I think, when the Goblins are very powerful and kind of mysterius but like Harry.)
person SP777
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #24..

Sooo...Harry just surrendered the vaults, but not the money? That went back to the Black heirs, right? If so, then
it went back to Harry, since he is one.

By the way, good suspense...and we're coming to the end right?
person moodysavage
schedule October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa write a truly awesome letter as Lucius.
person SP777
schedule October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

Once again, I like how you portray Lucius & Narcissa as a married couple, I like their
talks together, even when Lucius is being a butt. :-)

Ever thought about biting the bullet and doing an evil Lucius?