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for The Long Defeat

by Lomonaaeren

person Jester
schedule January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great story is over. I enjoyed this very much
and I love the end. Its so nice to see these two happy
after all teh hartships.
Thank you for writing this down.
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As always a lovely, long work. And the whole goblin-slavery thing? Carried out perfectly. Just the right pitch of drama and romance and a hint or twelve of angst in all the right places. Thanks so much for sharing this!
person BAFan
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 30

Great story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
person SP777
schedule November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #29..

I take it we're coming to the epilogue? If so, it's been a nice journey, I really
enjoyed this story, it was different from what you usually do. I like the characterizations
also..and how you portrayed the goblins in this.
person staar
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Draco understands a bit and that Harry is not going away altogether.... thanks for the update
person Jester
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That might actually be an awesome plan!
Harry going to the Muggl world relaxing a bit
but keeping in touch or in floo connection.
And and some point he either enjoys it or misses magic too much!
person staar
schedule November 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So Harry is going to leave and live in with the juggles !!! so what happens to Draco will he go to or what....Ron's a ass and Hermione with her way of thinking she's nuts too....like to see what happens if he goes ....thanks for the update
person Jester
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It makes me sad that most people actually do forget what you do for them.
I see that with some fanfictions out there. People who write their stories
and who might be not perfect and they get insulted for giving. Kind of like
Harry just that Harry would have paid with his life and freedom..
SO I hope the people with minds in the right places pop up soon for him.
person staar
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry's thinking of why everyone betrayed him is shit to me ...if they feel glitz so they should have done it and not a child !!!!!!!! but well that that...thanks for the update 1!!!!!!!!!
person Marron
schedule November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry was soooo cool!
I loved it. Though I'm sure that some People will soon try to either punish him or use him for their own good.
It'll be interesting to see Harry's next Actions.