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for Burning Day

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #15...

A small question...Harry isn't still wearing glasses, is he? If so, why?

...and good idea on the phoenix illusions. Though I do miss ole' girl. :-(
Any chance for a different type of familiar for Harry? I still say kitten, we've done
birds already. Besides cats are sneaky & can move around undetected, the perfect spies.
person Jester
schedule August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hee well thanks! Not sure if my way of thinking as a castle is good though.
At least its a magical castle that can be soft and is magical powerful animagus.
I wonder if the founders had the same feeling with the castle, or if the magic
just grew over the century.
I am glad that Draco is ok. That showing off of his wound reminded me of the
Hippogriff thing in school.
I also look forward to that showing off thing they talked about
person Jester
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay yeah you are right, he doesnt really need it. Well as Hogwarts is kind of
an extension to his magic and all with the bond that makes him an Hogwarts Animagi.
Nothis as common as a cat no I am a caste. grin Sorry for that
person BAFan
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 13

Great chapter! Harry's enemies have left him no choice but to play hard-ass, since they continue to attack him or those under his protection. When will they learn? Idiots.

I agree with the reviewer (Jester?) who suggested that Harry should become an animagus, but I think some kind of extremely venomous snake, such as a taipan, would be better. Or a spider even. Something that might allow him to remain unseen by his enemies until it was too late. Geeze, I sound bloodthirsty! *g*
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
If I was an Unspeakable, I would have had a heart attack. Harry's display of power is frieghting. Poison Master H, thank you for your great service. I'm sure Dark Lord Potter will need more poisons in the future. Ah. Draco darling, getting a bit hot under the robes? Yes, I do look forward to your next encounter with Harry.
person SP777
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #13..

*looks with glee at Harry*
Me: Harry Potter you're the GREATEST!
Harry: Yes I know. *smirks*
Draco: *rolls eyes* Don't encourage him.

I thought for sure there was going to be a BATTLE. You haven't done those in a while.
person Jester
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
I know this has little to do with the story plot, but I was wondering
if Harry with all his power ever thought about becoming an Animagus?
Not sure, but it seems like a very nice way around some situations
where he needs to be more hidden. (Well if he doesnt turn out to be
ab elephant) That just came to my mind while writing dont ask me why.
person SP777
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #12..

Let me guess, Hortensia is the Mad Scientist, right? :-)
person BAFan
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11

*sigh* It was disturbing to see Harry threatening Draco the way he did in the faux memory, and to see Draco being so servile, for that matter. Finally this series is beginning to mesh with "Charming When He Needs To Be."
person SP777
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #11...

Sooo, in a way is the latter half of this chapter about to tie in with the
one shot that started it all?