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Would be nice if you would bring the next Chapter someday

But Harry took Parvati. Parvati got Padma to go with Ron. This makes no sense.

Around chapter three or four realized this is an entirely different Harry Potter universe. Sorry about the correction before. Though, speaking of unwarranted corrections, Hermione stops herself from correcting Harry about what to call the three-headed dog, but he's right; Cerberus is the name of the specific three-headed dog that guards the gate to Hades, not the term for the species.

The threesome scene was hot once they got going, especially the BJ. I want to read Hermione trying again until and after she's successful, in just as much lurid detail every time.

I hope you continue posting this!

Loving the story. Can't wait to see the entire list :-)

TWO review-worthy fics in a day!! :D I'm a lucky girl. I can't wait to read more of this, it's such a refreshingly detail-driven Harem story. ;) In both the AU!plot and the plot of the actual story there is just enough of your own take to keep it interesting, and enough backstory to support where this seems like it's going! And all without the drawn-out, tired, 'THIS IS MY BACKSTORY' that is so clumsy. Thank you for assuming your readers have a brain. Good luck writing!

I read the first couple chapters somewhere else, and I am glad that I got the chance to read more. Thanks for sharing your story.

Glad to see another story playing with Elixer. You implied that Hermione has had some too?

This is... really hot.

What I like the most? My biggest gripe with stories where Harry bangs a lot of girls is that the girls don't mind. If he's sleeping around, so should they etc. In this instance, if Harry is sleeping around, Hermione should also be getting some dick etc.

Making her a closet lesbian, while a bit of a copout, is really good. She gets something she secretly desires out of this 'arrangement' too, so it's a little more believable.

The sex scenes are super hot too.