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for Challenge Accepted

by Swizzle89

person The Sex Elf
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So now both boys have been on top.
Who will top the next time, and become the alpha male?
The man with the bigger dick. I demand a cock-comparison. With a swordfight for good measure!
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear this is Hot! Very nice job ;) I cannot wait to see how Harry lures Draco in and I absolutely loved that last line! Yes Harry, you are very good at watching Draco which gave of this wonderful drarry obsession in the first place
person delia cerrano
schedule July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
And no one heard them in the library? I suppose they could have put up a "notice me not spell" and a "muffling spell" or something. Anyway nothing like that ever happens in my library...at least not that I notice. More please.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Clever concept and sexily written. Too bad chapter 3 wasn't just a couple paragraphs longer! Next chapter please.
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story, really loved it.

My suggestion for chapter 3: they meet up again for a bit more "release", but this time Draco refuses to bottom. They clash in a heated fight for dominance, wrestling for position until one man manages to penetrate the other.

person Mitsuki
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? A cliffie? Update!!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
How brave...and you did a good job too. Looking forward to the next chapters.
person Whitmore
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice One!
I do hope there will be a sequel.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
1st story and a sexy one at that? You did a outstanding job...even your grammar had few errors. If you decide to make a` story of this, I'll be reading.
person outlawgal
schedule May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. I hope they have another encounter soon. VERY soon :)