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for Draco, What Have You Done?

by SpeedyTomato

schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I wish you could hear me squeal with happiness. This is a fantastic start and I am so excited. You are wicked. How did you come up with this plot? All I can say is I bow at your greatness. We're not worthy!
person Marky802
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Can't wait for more!
person milapink
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco will be arrested, vengeance does not come out as expected!
I'm finding a lot of fun. Is Dumbledore evil or just inconvenient?
Kisses
person HEARTSTAR
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh more please when you can thank you!
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I look forward to this newest journey! :D
person snape_lust
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
another great start to a new story. Poor harry, I just want to smack that smug look off voldy's face. why wouldn't harry be the dominant? You pretty much just stated that harry wouldn't be the dominant but not why that is so. I hope to see, if you are going with the dom/sub theme that in reality, Dom's only have the power sub's grant them. dom's cannot, and if a good one, will never force their sub's into anything they don't want to do. Dom's are the protectors/leaders and sub's are the support and caregivers. There is always respect for each other and their roles. One does not have more power than the other. but, in fanfiction that is really not conveyed. It's all about force and rape and subjugation and slavery.

Anyhoo, i look forward to more.
person rebekahalana
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome begining to this story !
I have no idea how you can come up with such amazing plots ...
schedule April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really good :) I really like this story and hope you continue with it :D I love the pairing :) x
schedule April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, more threesome awesomeness from the Fast Fruit! First chapter off to a great start, with built in character tension... looking forward to more. Your obsesed reader, BDF
person tabEkat
schedule April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This new twist in a story has potential.

Is Draco going to be held accountable? By the school? Ministry? His father? The Dark Lord? Because no matter the eventual outcome, three other wizards have just had their entire lives turned upside down due to his selfish, petty actions. It'd be nice to see him actually face the consequences of his actions for once without being sheltered from them.

Am debating with myself how the three bonded wizards are going to react and wondering if Snape is going to lose his temper with Draco over this stunt. Could Draco be less Slytherin? Sure he was attempting stealth, but he was still seen by a professor carrying out his attack.

Can't wait to see what happens next.