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for Draco, What Have You Done?

by SpeedyTomato

person autumngold
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! I am so glad that not only Crabb, Goyle and Malfoy are being punished; but all of the Professors of Hogwarts as well. Honestly, how did Dumbledore ever get away with having a Basilisk running lose in his school, hiding a philosophers stone, or any of his other test he has put Harry through. The only thing I think that is bad about this is that he personally isn't in any trouble because of it. Hopefully that will happen soon! Thank you so much for your incredible new chapter! Can't wait to find out what Voldemort will discover about their bond!
person HEARTSTAR
schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update I look forward to more when you can thank you...
person BAFan
schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1-4

Something occurred to me: They can't hurt each other with spells but what about physical means, such as a knife or potion? Also, can they cast benign spells at each other, ones that aren't intended to cause harm?
person history
schedule June 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really think that Voldemort is stupid to be so smug. Sirius and Harry are two whereas he is alone so i don't think that he can't be so sure of him. I'm pretty sure that Harry and Sirius can be a pain in his ass...
person autumngold
schedule June 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous update! I can't wait for both Sirius and Harry to find out that Dumbledore considers Harry to be a necessary sacrifice to defeat Voldemort. I just wonder how happy Sirius will be knowing that Dumbledore expects Harry to die for the "Greater Good". It is pretty sad when Voldemort is almost treating Harry better than Dumbledore! Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter! Your story has me not only feeling bad for Harry and Severus but Voldemort as well. I just can't wait for the three of them to get their revenge. Hopefully, since this entire thing happened at Hogwarts, some important things will be changed around the school. Dumbledore has covered up for the guilty for too long, he needs to go. Severus needs to go with him since he is doing to much for Dumbledore to even take care of his head of house duties. Love your update! Can't wait for more!
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope that they will throw the book at the boys, but will find proof that Severus is in no way to blame. Perhaps Draco discovered a way to ward the area where he was brewing to foil the detection spells? Severus knows a lot, but even he can be fooled....
person Quaff
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a fabulous story. Thanks for writing it.
person Morgana
schedule May 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, Draco really did fuck up!
That's a really intriguing story, btw.
person autumngold
schedule May 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Silly Draco, I wonder if he could even realize how many people are going to be after his head? It's just too bad that Voldemort has to stay in hiding, he is one that would really make Draco pay. Will Sirius and Harry start to have real feelings for each other? Will they start to care about Voldemort? I can't wait to find out! Wonderful new chapter! I can't wait to read more!