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for Draco, What Have You Done?

by SpeedyTomato

person Bowie36
schedule March 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I’ve just finished re+reading this, I really can’t wait to see what happens to Draco.  Is it bad that poetic justice would be to have the same done to him..not that I’d want to saddle anyone with his whiney self. 

person autumngold
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your outstanding new chapter! I'm really starting to like Tom. Hopefully Dumbledore's plans for Harry, Sirius and Tom won't work. It's good that the Order won't be able to use Sirius' property anymore. Especially because, thanks to Dumbledore, they could be planning Sirius and Harry's death. Excellent update! Can't wait to read more of your wonderful story!
person Tahn
schedule April 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So, I'm liking the bond thing that is growing, and I like that they are happier now. But won't Sirius learning his role make everything go back to stress? I hope not. Anyways, I hope you keep writing this story. Please send me a note or something when you update. Thank you for sharing your story.
person rigger42
schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if they could transmit images rather than having a voice overheard -- it has a visual component, right? Then Sirius could basically tap it when he is clear and just read rather than get overheard. I'm hoping they learn Sirius is dominant, soon, but assume they'll still find out - to their dismay - that they can't just up and leave, still, or simply order him to bring people in, since the bond won't allow them to bring harm to each other. How much of the Dark Lord plans and persona are needed to keep them protected and when/how will they learn that Albus is planning for them to die?
person autumngold
schedule March 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous new chapter! I just wonder if Dumbledore realizes how much he plays with people's lives? For him to be planning the murder of Tom, the boy he wouldn't help as a student, and Harry, the kid he left with his abusive relatives is really cold. He could have done so much to save both boys if he hadn't been convinced that he is always right. Personally I like how Tom is changing in your story. Hopefully, with Sirius and Harry's help, he can change the wizarding world for the better. Excellent update! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
person lizkrohn
schedule January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Time that HP's terrible home life and AD role in SB not getting a trial so AD can keep HP under his thumb comes out. LV can keep HP away from the newspapers to keep off the depression SB would agree. AND SS needs to realise his oath is to HP not AD and HP is safer with The Dark Lord than the Light!
schedule January 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
love this story cant wait for new chapters
person Autumngold
schedule December 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore has no shame! I can't believe how he wants to sacrifice both Sirius and Harry for his own warped 'Greater Good'. I just hope that he, Severus and Draco pay for what they have done and planned. Thank you for your incredible new chapter! I am so excited to find out what you have planned for Sirius, Voldemort and Harry next!
person lizkrohn
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can Sirius build a sexual relationship with With Tom and Tom with Harry but Sirius having a parental role with Harry. Tom will act as a anchor being the second dominant.

Time for Tom to find out what AD has been hiding from Harry and Severus has an oath to protect Harry - meaning he will truly support the side HP will be safest with and in this case it is Tom as he won't kill HP and wants him happy but AD wants his own GG!

The Potters and Black have seats on the Wizamgamot - Tom can exploit that too.
person starr
schedule October 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yes can't wait to see what you have in store for Draco dreariest !!!!!!!!!thanks for the update ...man are they ever going to see eye to eye here ?????