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for Keep This Wolf

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Getting a kick out of the story even if I don't quite know how Harry ended up a werewolf...did he get bitten in a battle. I don't think this story ever said. Looking forward to the Leadership fight. Hope Ninian gets beat bad and Draco sees it. Take that back to the Ministry Draco!
person Jester
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was so absorted in the other stories that I missed two updates.
I am glad that Dracos is back with Harry. But I fear there are a lot
of misunderstandings coming between the Ministry and the pack.
Hope Draco will be on Harrys side soon, but I also look forward to a
bit more dancing around each other.
Draco being aroused is a great start.
schedule June 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
True, to be that. Draco, does he understand that the harder we try to hide something, the more obvious we make it?
person delia cerrano
schedule June 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story but I'm still having to work a little harder to figure it out what's going on. Not crazy about the vampire after Harry's blood all the time. I don't know why but that relationship creeps me out. Maybe I just want Harry be all Draco's & not sharing blood or talking about it at least with someone else. (Now that makes me weird or creepy I guess!)
s blood all the time.
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That vampire is not going to be in a thrilled mood the next time he and Harry meet. Why does Harry play that game? To survive? And now the Minister is up to something. Grudge?
person SP777
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #8...

Strong will folks, it's all about strong will and Harry gots aplenty. :-)
It'll be interesting to see how the dumb-dumbs try to enforce THEIR own will on
Harry...and be shame-faced for even trying.
schedule June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving this! I past over this for the longest time not really liking creature fic's much but this one is awesome, well done :) I feel so sorry for our super suppressed Draco and can't wait to see how that eventually explodes in someway. Paracelsus is a very interesting character and I don't really know what to make of him or his relationship with Harry. Looking forward to the next part
person BAFan
schedule June 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7

Ah yes, this reaction was the "or something" I referred to in my previous review. ;-) Really wondering what kind of reception Draco is going to face back at the Ministry. I think they will be *extremely* interested to hear about Harry's power.
person SP777
schedule June 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #7..

I don't know about anybody else, but I LOVE Paracelsus. :-) He is a true vampire
thru & thru, devious, manipulative...and a thorn in Harry's backside! :-D I would
hate to see him killed by Harry's hands, he's almost a comic relief to lighten the mood.

I would love a backstory/flashback on how they met. Will u feature him more in the future?
person delia cerrano
schedule June 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Draco was given this case, chore, whatever because he had known Harry personally for a long time and whoever it was thought that would get him in better to Harry. Maybe even thought it would distract Harry enough to allow the next step or thing that they wanted Harry to do even if it is as simple as something to do with Thornsbury.