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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Liked this one, next please.
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 22
Great chapter! What in the world was Umbridge trying to accomplish with her little trinket? Did she think it would somehow allow her to control Harry?
Great chapter! What in the world was Umbridge trying to accomplish with her little trinket? Did she think it would somehow allow her to control Harry?
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September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #21,,
In a way, it's kind of depressing how Paracelsus turned out. I liked that crazy
whack job of a vampire...and now he has succumbed to blood madness. :-(
Too bad you didn't give us a backstory on him.
Maybe Harry can think of a way to keep Paracelsus' blood thrall down, since he has the
saving people thing in spades...or are you going to...? Anyway, warn me if you're going to off him.
In a way, it's kind of depressing how Paracelsus turned out. I liked that crazy
whack job of a vampire...and now he has succumbed to blood madness. :-(
Too bad you didn't give us a backstory on him.
Maybe Harry can think of a way to keep Paracelsus' blood thrall down, since he has the
saving people thing in spades...or are you going to...? Anyway, warn me if you're going to off him.
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is probably my favorite story of yours! I like how Harry is very powerful and confident and has superwolf powers. I like how he brought Draco back to life. I like the intrigue at the Ministry and the hints of conspiracy. Well done all around! I enjoy every chapter!
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about 20...
Is this one of those stories where you're trying to mislead folks into one
direction, while the evidence is right in their face, especially when it comes
to Umbridge? Because I'm drawing a conclusion that she isn't human herself.
Is this one of those stories where you're trying to mislead folks into one
direction, while the evidence is right in their face, especially when it comes
to Umbridge? Because I'm drawing a conclusion that she isn't human herself.
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not crazy about the vampire so I'm glad that Harry has is number. Also that he is really going after Umbridge...yea!!
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September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HOHOHO! WHAT A TWIST!
Nice job with Umbridge, too! I'm curious about this with her and Parcelus now...
Also, I really want to compliment you on your work with werewolves as a whole in this story. I'm also an avid Dramione reader, and I occasionally see this kind of thing pop up with Draco, but I've found that some people underplay the wolf side, or OVERplay it, which is worse. This chapter was an exceptional example of the careful balance you've made between human and wolf here. Harry has a lot of wolf-ish behavior, especially with the lolling of his tongue, and I think it's just PERFECT! Kudos!
I'm eager to see where this leads. Draco's doing an excellent job and very focused on his Revenge. I do love me a Slytherin-ish Draco. :)
Nice job with Umbridge, too! I'm curious about this with her and Parcelus now...
Also, I really want to compliment you on your work with werewolves as a whole in this story. I'm also an avid Dramione reader, and I occasionally see this kind of thing pop up with Draco, but I've found that some people underplay the wolf side, or OVERplay it, which is worse. This chapter was an exceptional example of the careful balance you've made between human and wolf here. Harry has a lot of wolf-ish behavior, especially with the lolling of his tongue, and I think it's just PERFECT! Kudos!
I'm eager to see where this leads. Draco's doing an excellent job and very focused on his Revenge. I do love me a Slytherin-ish Draco. :)
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September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good job...great chapter!! Wow you really caught me by surprise with Paracelsus (I'm guessing about the spelling)! I never would have thought of that. Like Draco changing back into the "real Draco" that I knew and loved. Also very glad he and Harry are getting
together (I hope!)! Really don't trust or like that vampire at all. Can't imagine what he and Umbridge are up to except it won't be good for anyone but them.
together (I hope!)! Really don't trust or like that vampire at all. Can't imagine what he and Umbridge are up to except it won't be good for anyone but them.
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September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #19..
Eww! She's what??? Even that's a new low for a vampire.
Eww! She's what??? Even that's a new low for a vampire.
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August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #18..
Hmm..Umbridge + rotting smell = experiments on magical creatures?
Hmm..Umbridge + rotting smell = experiments on magical creatures?