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for Remaking Destiny

by LadyLaran

person Anon
schedule April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far.I enjoy stories that mess with Dumbledore.Keep up the good work
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person delia cerrano
schedule April 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This looks like the first chapter of a really good story! Love powerful and clever Harry stories.
person pooh
schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love this new Lady Longbottom, strong and decisive. I can see lots of the strong woman in conflict with dumbles with her in the top position! Looking forward to the next chapter!
person mary
schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great, your story it's engaging, can't wait for the next chapter. From Italy, mary
person Gruffard
schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very fun and interesting start. Do hope to see more.

The OC is interesting, but other then obviously seemingly being in Harry's corner, we don't know much about her. Hope there is more chapters soon to address that.

Thanks for the share.
person Seliki
schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome and wonderful and I love a good Dumbles bashing lol. I like the fact that Lady Longbottom is taking Harry because there are just not enough "lets let Harry grow up smart stories" I can't wait for more.
person Tk_M
schedule April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story has great potential. I can't wait for the next chapter.