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I am enjoying this story very much. Can't wait to see if Malfoy is kissed or if he manages to wriggle free. Looking forward to the continuation of his story and it's unique take on this premise.

Nice. It has to be Bellatrix next to be trialed I would love for her to get the kiss and the horcrux located in her vault found and destroyed.

I love where this is going. I can't wait for more.

A very succinct chapter, yet you covered all the important details. I'm very happy to learn that Severus and Lily were bonded as siblings. I wonder who coerced Severus into joining Voldy with threats against lily? What a great wrench to throw into the story. I can't wait for more!

Fun story. I love that you are good at writing smart and intelligent characters.

Your story is amazingly fun. All the different potential plot lines are awesome. I look forward to reading more.

I love this story!!! You are tackling something huge: the fallout the first 24, 36, 48 hours after a war. The lying, cheating, manipulating by those that want to be on top and in control. These hours are critical and set the foundation for a society (and individuals as seen in canon)for generations to come.

I love all the strong women you have as protagonists that foil the powerful men that seem to be the antagonists in this story such as DD, Voldy, Crouch, DE's. Though I don't want this review (or story) to devolve into a gender and their roles discussion, it's seems very appropriate that women are foiling the men.

The Minister, The Dowager, Lady Lily, most likely Madame Bones, and Petunia have all played and will play critical roles in protecting the interests of Harkin and Neville (our hero's) against those that want to use them for their own gain. In this case the powerful men, no matter what side they are on. Will Minerva and Poppy be brought into the conspiracy as well? They'll need people in Hogwarts to foil DD and Snape's influence.

Oh, Snape will be a total wild card won't he? If the Minister uses truth serum, and is already going to question every person with a Mark about any change of minds or loyalties, Snape's actions against Voldy will be known by the Ministry. Once the Dowager learns that Snape turned spy because of his love for Lily, she's going to try and secure Snape ASAP.

Snape will be a wild card as he won't be forced by DD to teach or do his will under the threat of Azkaban or guilt induced manipulation (ie "after everything I've done for you" with disappointed twinkle). Will he make the same choice or will he venture out on his own? Will the Dowager get to him in order to plant a seed if it looks like he'll be at Hogwarts? Snape could be the ultimate linchpin. Whoever has him, has the upper hand. Gah, so many possibilities!!!

As a side note on a somewhat unrelated topic, I've always though the Librarian, Irma Pince has been woefully neglected. She could play so many roles.

Anyhoo, thank you for indulging in my rambling and I can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!

I just want to say that I love this story! Its such a wish fulfillment for me. I hate a lot of Dumbledore's manipulations so I enjoy seeing others circumvent him. I cannot wait to read more!! As for pairing. I dont know if you are going to bother with it in this story since I dont know if there will be time jumps. I do like slash. Especially when it is an overly accepted thing in the wizarding world. Id love if there was some of that included but that is up to you. Cant wait for more!

Awesome!! Harry and Neville will be awesome brothers!!

This was good. I'd like to see where it goes. Please don't stop writing.