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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you add details and personality to the characters. It's refreshing, I've read some stories that were rushed, lacking details or both. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!! look forward to the next update.
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good chapter and the judgements seemed more than fair. Looking forward to the rest.
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG can I say that I love this !!!!!!!! Never have I read something like this and it's so good...getting to them before all the shit happens ....love that the dumb headmaster has not gotten his way !!!!!!!!! So happy that I opened this and read it....Can't wait for more ...to see how things end up......likeDubbles in shit !!!!!!!!! and Harry having a wonderful better life ....Well you gotr me hooked So I'll be waiting for more !!!!!!!!! now I'll shut up
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh love it, I can't wait to see what happen next.
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Looking forward to seeing this continue develop. It answers the question of what the Potters would do to protect their son nicely and is developing a unique alternate to canon.
Love the Lady Callidora Longbottom; she's a strong matriarch and needn't apologize for that. She also doesn't take anyone's nonsense, knows what she wants to do and gets it done by working the system.
The bit with the Minister extending wartime status to the trials held was genius and cut off any shenanigans that others might try to circumvent justice being served. Can't wait to see the results...
Love the Lady Callidora Longbottom; she's a strong matriarch and needn't apologize for that. She also doesn't take anyone's nonsense, knows what she wants to do and gets it done by working the system.
The bit with the Minister extending wartime status to the trials held was genius and cut off any shenanigans that others might try to circumvent justice being served. Can't wait to see the results...
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December 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4
Good chapter! I love how Dumbledore's plans were thwarted by Callidora and Minister Bagnold, though I'm sure he still has a few cards up his sleeve. And, yay, Sirius is free!
Really looking forward to the next update.
Good chapter! I love how Dumbledore's plans were thwarted by Callidora and Minister Bagnold, though I'm sure he still has a few cards up his sleeve. And, yay, Sirius is free!
Really looking forward to the next update.
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September 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed this chapter...one of the few times that someone realized that the Potters were not stupid to fall for Dumbles lies...
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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
my apologies for no review of the last chapter, I did one, but there was no confirming set of letters to type in and therefore no review printed. This chapter was just as good as the last 2, I love the Dowager and am glad to see of the trial outcomes so far...looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This a great story you should look to add it to Harry Potter FanFic Archive to reach more readers.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter