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for Catching the Train

by SpeedyTomato

person autumngold
schedule July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love your new chapter! Thank goodness Harry is starting to notice Bill and Charlie's relationship. I have a feeling that Bill and Charlie will like the support they will receive from Sirius and Harry about it. Especially after having to hide it from their family. Excellent new chapter!
person R.L. Foxx
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
:) I'm really looking forward to the training conversations, sounds like it's gonna be a blast. Love the Updates, as always
person autumngold
schedule May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your new chapter is completely wonderful! I am glad that both Bill and Charlie now realize that Harry isn't, and never was, serious about their sister. She would never be able to satisfy him the way that Sirius does. Excellent update! Thank you for your incredible new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person Charisma
schedule May 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
really good story
person R.L. Foxx
schedule April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
:) very interesting! I really like the plot and which direction it's headed has me pretty excited to know more! Can't wait to see what'll happen with the couples separately and with the club as well
person Simon
schedule April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting story. I look forward to reading more.
person starr
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
really can't wait to see the four together well you know what i mean...Thanks !!!
person autumngold
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! I am glad that Bill and Charlie have the opportunity to earn money and learn at the club. Will Charlie like it as much as Bill will? Hopefully it doesn't put a strain on their relationship. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter! It is good that Sirius and Harry are willing to give both Bill and Charlie a chance to work at their club. Hopefully the two will be able to handle what goes on there. It would be bad if Charlie got scared off. Excellent update! Thank you for your incredible story! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule January 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very wonderful update! I am so glad that both Harry and Sirius have a system for when either Doms or Subs get out of control. I am curious whether or not Charlie and Bill are going to start asking them any questions? Have they ever read the rules of the club? Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!