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for Shattered

by Diamonddancer229

schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your reviews!

In response to yours Evanna Von, the potion was specifically designed with Harry's DNA for Harry, the potion will only be effective in changing his genetic makeup because of that. Also, the potion is used to sort of mark Harry as Voldemort's equal and his Consort. Voldemort is essentially making Harry as powerful as him but Voldemort wouldn't be foolish enough to make an entire arm capable of overthrowing him if they got the mind to. Even though I did address the fact that Voldemort has tweaked the potion to make Harry incapable of betraying him, this is something that takes a bit of his magical energy to do everyday, and it drawing constantly, if only a miniscule amount of the Dark Lord's power. However, to make a whole army that would require a great deal more power to control more creatures like Harry, and power is not something the Dark Lord is willing to spend foolishly. (Later on though Voldemort will find it quite hard to control Harry, though Harry is disinclined to betray him by Harry's own will.)

I really appreciated your review, I see that I definitely should discuss the potion and the consequences of Harry becoming what he is, and what it means for Voldemort to have an unruly hybrid creature as powerful as him running amuck. You've given me such great ideas!
person Evanna Von
schedule May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. It's weird though the potion is only used on Harry. If Voldemort can make such weapons from ordinary people, why doesn't he make an army?
person Excessively Complex
schedule May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it love it!