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for Harry Potter and the Naga King

by ravensowleye

schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Please write more!
person reba
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. Please, please make Harry a person with some backbone, a brain and not afraid to use it. Being a Gryffindor doesn't mean he doesn't know how to barter. It just means he uses louder means to get exactly what he wants when he wants it.
person Amber
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More please, I am interested to see where this is going. Do you have notifications for updates?
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I find this to be a good start to a very interesting story and I will be waiting to read more.
person Jan
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start, I can't wait for more, please update chapter 2 soon ^_^
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay - interesting and different... I like it! :)
person Linda
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far -can't wait to read more
person booboo
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the first chapter. I like your writing style. Hope you update soon.
person Yuddle
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really hope, for my sake, but also for yours, that you are going to post new chapter very, very, very sooon!! Do you hear me? Very soon!!!! Eather way. Great start for new story. I normally don't read new stories (I'm waiting for more chapters), but your summary was interesting, so I have made exception. And gues what - I'm not regreting it! Just hope, that updates will be often (or longer chapters!), so I can enjoy your story! :)
person Rainbow12004
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love it