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for Cruising the Course of Fate

by Lomonaaeren

person Rina
schedule May 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I already knew that the Goldstein-Potter relationship was doomed to fail. Ugh, what a gold-digging little rat. You should have thrown him overboard instead!
person SP777
schedule April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Oh. My. Gaaaawd! Dude seriously??? :-D

This was fun! Anthony was a mess, I don't know how Harry stayed with him for so long!
I thought for sure you would have had Harry take the galleons away from Anthony towards
the end at least!

I never seen such a delusional character...and that was pretty good having Draco working on
a cruise ship doing what he does. Never seen that before. Good job!
person SP777
schedule April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Actually I keep forgetting this was a rewrite, but you still did good putting your
slight spin on it, with a more comedic tone. :-)