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April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story I would love to read more.:D
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the first two chapters of this story. I hope you continue with.
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait for chapter 3 to be updated along with much more ^_^
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic beginning!!! I'm hooked!!!
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Verynnterestimg plot line and twists. Hearings Harry's true story this early will separate the co trolling ones from those who truly care. Harry's life is about to get even more I there sting thanks to the arrival of his grandmother. Meelo is very interesting indeed and will hopefully become more than just a person who can clam Harry to one that maybe Harry could eventually fall in love with.... I guess we'll have to wait and see.
~~ Meechy
~~ Meechy
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 & 2
There are two major stumbling blocks for me in this story. First, the Queen has been in America for the past fifteen years or so, and never once tried to communicate with her pregnant daughter or her son-in-law? Even if she had entrusted their care to Dumbledore, I find it hard to believe she wouldn't want to talk to Lily and Sirius once in a while. Second, how did Dumbledore expect to maintain his deceptions once she returned to the UK - and unless he planned to assassinate her and all her retinue he had to know she could return at any time.
Also, you keep making allusions to Ron and Hermione becoming more distant from Harry since Sirius's escape from Azkaban; is this because they knew that Sirius is Harry's father? Maybe you plan to explain all this in later chapters, in which case I will patiently wait for further updates.
There are two major stumbling blocks for me in this story. First, the Queen has been in America for the past fifteen years or so, and never once tried to communicate with her pregnant daughter or her son-in-law? Even if she had entrusted their care to Dumbledore, I find it hard to believe she wouldn't want to talk to Lily and Sirius once in a while. Second, how did Dumbledore expect to maintain his deceptions once she returned to the UK - and unless he planned to assassinate her and all her retinue he had to know she could return at any time.
Also, you keep making allusions to Ron and Hermione becoming more distant from Harry since Sirius's escape from Azkaban; is this because they knew that Sirius is Harry's father? Maybe you plan to explain all this in later chapters, in which case I will patiently wait for further updates.
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love it and I like when Harry isn't so easily manpulated. Can't wait to read more....thank you for a lovely first two chapters.