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for Blood Ties

by Beloved_Enemy

person pickles87
schedule April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.
Thank you.
person EEvans
schedule April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I too have enjoyed this plot bunny and so I eagerly await your next chapter! Too bad we don't have a pic for our characters; any fanartists following this? More soon please!
EE
person Tanya
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, such an interesting storyline. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Your writing style is a pleasure to read, looking forward to seeing more :)
person Julie
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like it so far! I can't wait to see what happens! You have built the story in such a beautiful and realistic way. I fell into the story within the first paragraph.
person Leania07
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting; I've always thought Muggle-born witches and wizards were an oxymoron because how can one have magic if it wasn't in the family line to begin with? Even just one spark, which would classify them as more Squib then Muggle, would need to be there first. I am intrigued that you decided to make her a Zabini, and twin sister of Blaise, and I must say I haven't seen (or read) that one yet. You have my attention, dear author, and I wish to read more.

Leania
person Victoria
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I agree with your note-- too many stories with a similar premise are not realistic, but the idea of Hermione discovering she's a pureblood witch is a fun premise to explore. I like how you've started and am looking forward to more.
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see this story unfold. At least to see the reactions! Please continue! :)
person petalsoft
schedule March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. I've read Hermione Zabini stories before, and I've always enjoyed them. I'm very interested on how you develop this. Please continue.
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far! What an interesting concept! I'm eagerly awaiting more, so please continue!
person Tricia Timmis
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story and hope you continue it. I like the fact that you are making it more realistic. If you continue i will look forward to reading each chapter.