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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Sara
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, love this fic
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Its just mean to make me wait so long for an update. Cruel...we'll have to work on that. Anyway I love that he is working with Teddy and making him like him that will be the best in winning Remus over to stop being so afraid of him. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
person delia cerrano
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Severus is softer and more understanding than he thinks. Can't wait for Remus to wake up!
person Ciara_D
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know how you were going to pull off the inheritance but well done! You're handling this plot line well. I didn't think you could make me buy into it but you are, hook line and sinker. Please update soon, because I will be back. Cheers and thanks for writing - Ciara
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for more i love this story
person BAFan
schedule March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1-2

What a grim world this seems to be, where people, including children, can be sold as slaves. How did it become so bleak, if Voldemort is dead? I hope we'll be finding out as the story progresses. At least Snape hasn't lost his humanity and is treating Remus and Teddy with compassion. Is Harry still alive in this?
schedule March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hmm. I like this story, poor Lupins...Please update soon!
person Ciara_D
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i'm intrigued. Snape seems very much in character. A little confused about what this inheritance situation is.
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing the grown werewolf is Remus and the child is Teddy....right?!