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May 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I felt you hit a good balance in this chapter. Watching it from Snape's perspective, with his revolution, helped me get through it as a reader. Lupin get's very silly on that potion, btw ^_^
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May 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Story seems to be coming along nicely. Relationship between Severus and Teddy is developing slowly but surely. I'm concerned about Remus finding out or remembering what all Severus had to do during the war. Needed or not he might not be able to forgive Snape and I have high hopes for Severus and Lupin (and Teddy). Lupin needs someone to value him and make him feel loved After the life he's lead and Teddy needs a good Dad.
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better! Great job with the history of the werewolf legislation and how they ended up as slaves - I had wondered if you would go into all that.
Can I just say that I really enjoy the way you slip from Remus' to Severus' POV - it seems so natural :o)
Can I just say that I really enjoy the way you slip from Remus' to Severus' POV - it seems so natural :o)
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The background on how the slavery took place answered a lot of questions I was having about the set up of this world. Horrible, but understandable. But now I'm completely angry at the Ministry, again. I don't know if its within to purview of your story, but knocking that apart would be wonderful! It deserves to be burned.
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April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A cliffhanger about Snape rumaging in Remus mind? Really? You couldn't go just 3 or 4 more paragraphs? Just kidding...liking the story very much.
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April 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I would like to see Severus take on the ministry, it could be amusing to see him go up against the warewolf laws that are too explicit. Remus seems to be starting to understand. Finally. I wonder what McNair knows about Severus that has not been revealed yet. It would be interesting to see a flashback to why he expects Severus to be so harsh. Or an introspection into Severus's struggle to be a good person.
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April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love how you handled this last conversation, even dealing with the Potter bit. You're really digging into this characters and it's a pleasure to read.
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April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Continuing to be a entertaining story. Like how Snape is confounding Remus with his kindness and is certainly winning Teddy over. More please. Surely Remus will see that there is only peace and caring for them with Snape. Will Harry come looking for Remus & Teddy...Harry was the godfather after all.
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yippy, awesome udates! your details abotu the potion making process are brilliant!
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April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Bubbles!!!! I was laughing to ^_^