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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person delia cerrano
schedule June 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Always another chapter in this story. Teddy & his dragon continue to be adorable and Severus and Remus trying to understand each other is so much fun...especially with the history they have together
person Deelicious
schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story! I rush to read the updates everyday. Please continue!!!!!!
person Kat
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Remus and Snape are having a breakthrough. That's awesome!!
person nailia
schedule May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
your story is amazing! absolutely marvolous!! ( i just think you forgot about the one foot that wasn't healing well.. perhaps, it caught up with the other the second day?) anyway please update soon because i can't wait for more!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better. I am really looking forward the ceremony though I would appreciate a quick overview since it's been some time since Severus told Remus about it(being a non-witch type I don't remember).
person Ciara_D
schedule May 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Teddy is so adorable and Severus is so good with him.
person Ciara_D
schedule May 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Severus needs some sleep. He's going to snap and get angry just because he can't think! But I understand why. The man has the patience of a saint. Really looking forward to Severus and Lupin bonding. They need to get that out of the way to be able to move. Lupin appears to be stuck.
person Kat
schedule May 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ch14

Severus gets chatty when he is tired, eh? It sure is amusing to see him spill all his carefully guarded secrets, but then not be met with the expected reactions. I hope we get to see what Teddy and Remus do while Severus sleeps. They are due for some father/son bonding time, as well as a chance to talk about Severus.
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ch12

Wow, Remus's ritual was a lot shorter than I thought it would be. I think you successfully walked the line between having something that was too mild to live up to the previously dropped hints, and something that was too graphic to read. I look forward to learning how Severus will be able to modify it to his needs.