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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Ciara_D
schedule June 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You made a flashback chapter interesting and compelling. Good job.
schedule June 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping to learn what happened after the war....please.
person milapink
schedule June 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I found the story very good, especially the relationship built between Remus and Severus.
Teddy is very cute.
Kisses
person Ciara_D
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Remus, darling, you're starting to blossom a little and Severus is your dark, warm sun.
person Kat
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I can't wait for the next update. I think the interaction between Teddy and Severus is the best.
schedule June 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story however I wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying the detailed description of Severus' potions. Great job!
schedule June 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter :) I really like Fred! While it's not exactly rare for a new character to be special & loved by us readers, it is rare that it is a house elf who catches my eye
person Sara
schedule June 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter, I think I'm as anxious to see the ceremony done and over with as Lupin and Snape now :)
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love love love this story.