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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Kapowallace
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This. Story. Is. Awesome. You're obviously a very talented writer, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Everything is so well done, I wouldn't change a thing!
person Lin
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!


You have no idea how happy it made me to see Harry...even though the meeting went about how I was expecting it to go. Gotta love that Gryffendor brain.
Although is it scary that I think Fred will hex him before Snape gets a chance?? Hopefully Teddy will warm up to him if given enough time. Poor Snape is gonna have a full house.
schedule June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Evil place to leave off.....hurry up PLEASE
person Ciara_D
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Severus is so good with Teddy and it's still believable in his character. Very good. Take you time and tell the story right, please. No rush.
person Nikte
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What do I think of your story? I LOVE IT!!!!
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aghh! What a cliffie.... That is just torture Sinister!
person Annika
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So good! I spent a few hours this morning reading all of it so far. Lovely work and great character development. No rush, but...please do keep working on it! :)
person Ciara_D
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful follow up to the last chapter and broadens the story so much. Severus needs to heal as much as Remus.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm ready for the ritual now please. Surely Remus will want to stay with Severus...the enemy you know is better than the one you don't. He wouldn't know for sure how the new owner would treat them.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Surely after the horrible war and even more horrible aftermath Remus would rather stay with the trouble he knows than one he doesn't know and could be worse. Teddy does as much for Severus as Severus does for Teddy I think.