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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person delia cerrano
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! They are working unknowingly toward a wonderful family of 3! I hope that the ritual, Harry, or the slave bond thing doesn't bring too much angst.
person Deelicious
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say, I love this story!!!! I can not wait until its complete. Great Job! !!!!
person Kat
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The chapter ends THERE?? Really???
All impatience aside - this is fantastic. Beautifully written. There aren't any flaws to distract from the story - no bad grammar, inconsistent characters, weird dialogue, nothing. You have readers, and we want more! :)
person Kapowallace
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see if he gets in the bath! (Not to mention what may happen in said bath!) I think you've captured both characters very well for the situation you've put them in, please continue!
person delia cerrano
schedule July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Teddy! Feeling so bad about himself because of something he can't help - being a werewolf.
Severus life is sure changing so much and in good ways so far.
person Kapowallace
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Keep it up! I'm loving how their relationship is slowly evolving!
person delia cerrano
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! Enjoyed reading of Harry's "attack" and that adorable Teddy's hiding under a table...sure wasn't what Harry expected. Looking forward to reading of Harry's next visit (hope he doesn't convince Remus to try to leave Severus)I'm hoping Teddy stays wary of Harry for awhile. Severus' story of Teddy's dragon not having to eat often & he had fed him when he was a boy was hysterical. I'm not sure I understand about the bonding (Sev & Remus & Teddy) but I think I'm looking forward to that.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha Harry Potter blasting his way in before just asking to come in. That whole thing was a surprise! Remus could be a little more protective of Severus after all he has done for Teddy and him. He didn't need to do any of it.
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this twist is funny, but I must say I expected better of Harry.
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Keep it up!! Cant wait for more.