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And now, we're left teetering on the edge right along with Remus! Nicely done!

I'm a regular reader, but a terrible reviewer. I've been waiting for each update eagerly! This is so well done!

Ha SinisterMe! With as much work you are putting in this story, you deserve the positive feedback. I keep an eye out for chapters to be posted and get thrilled when they are here.

Chapter 28 was so great, I love the way you detailed both men's emotions and thoughts, not just what's happening in the scene. It's all very in-character, too. I check this story and reread chapters all the time, and I'm so excited for chapter 29! No pressure or anything, I'm sure it will be just as good as the previous chapters. But I'm definitely looking forward to it. :)

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Ooh! I'm so excited for the next chapter! I love how the timeline moved up so quickly and that the ministry letter was late (of course!). I also appreciate that you didn't put Hermione with Ron. Not going with the obvious Weasley. I like how she still respects Professor Snape even though the boys don't. It's a good contrast, keeps them in character, and I like that Snape can hold a conversation with her better because of it. I also like how he assumes that no one would speak good of him from his old academy, it's classic Snape to assume that everyone thinks the worst of him!

MORE!!!!!!! I find myself checking back to this story almost every day for updates.

The romance, the sexiness, the emotional depth, the careful details...you rock. I check for updates on this all the time and I'm so psyched whenever I see a new chapter up :)

I was very excited to read about the visit, and I love that you added Ron and Hermione as a surprise. It seems like something the trio would do. I think you wrote them very true to character for the situation they found themselves in. I'm looking forward to the rest of their visit. Also, I love how attached Teddy has gotten to Severus. It's so sweet, and makes perfect sense for someone so young and abused to distrust such a pushy stranger as Harry and look to the strong adult he has learned to trust for protection. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Ooh, sexy bath time was great! I love all the tension between these two. Keep it up!

Beautiful prose, and well-developed characters. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!