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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person MrE-Quecky
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
kind of forgot to check in for updates, so I had a bunch of new chapters to read and I absolutely loooooved all of the updates! Still a wonderful story!
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Praise! Cheers! The wording of the bond was great. I am so glad Remus is getting a positive bond instead of one so restrictive. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter...
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really fast! I never expected to see another chapter so soon. I really like the rules of the bond and I thought you did a good job coming up with them. It will be interesting to see how they come into play, and if the ministry will except them. Thanks for another awesome installment, can't wait for more!
person kakashi
schedule September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I never liked Remus/Severus pairing but your story changed my opinion. I love it.
The rules are good I like it.
I think Severus should do something about Harry. Harry is very unrespectful and forgets that Severus as Remus' master can do how he wishes. Harry can't have a say in this.
So he should come to Severus home like he is the owner of it. Severus should remind Harry that this is his home and that he can't bother him like he wishes.
I can understand that Severus want Remus to have support but like this it shouldn't be. Because this is his home and he want to have some peace. He should tell this to Harry.
I'm sorry for writing down my own ideas but Harry is getting on my nerves. Somebody should tell him how unrespectful he is. Hermione and Ron shouldn't interfere in this too.
Hahaha you wrote your story so well and your characters are so real that I'm so agitated
Really I love your story and you did a great job!
person Lin
schedule September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
<3!!!!!!!

Love this chapter!!! For a moment I couldn't stop laughing when Remus read the bonding rules...Only Severus could go through a bonding ritual and come out the other side with MORE rules that the person who is actually supposed to have them. I love how Snape gave the ingredients for play-dough instead of just calling the item by name. I am a little worried for next chapter though, Remus just took that healing potion so that means he has no filter at the moment he is most likely going to end up chewing out Harry for saying something insensitive...on the other hand that could be really funny.
person Ethereal
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I came across this story a little while back and have literally not stopped reading it since I came across it. You have cost me many sleepless nights and for that I am grateful. Your writing is wonderful and I have not seen these characters portrayed in such a way but I really love it. I do love the direction you're going in and I hope you continue soon!
person Kat
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Sev and Remus being big kids is sooo cool!!! Awesome about the bond! Full moon right? 🐶🐶
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I get to be your 100th review... cool. I really loved the last chapter. It was beautiful. I tend to write other pairings, but this has really captivated me and brought me out of my comfort zone. It's unique, intriguing and well written.
person Kapowallace
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the sex scene last chapter! There was so much buildup and waiting, and it was worth every second of it! I think it's great how the bond is loving and how they're adjusting to being around one another now that it's done. I can't wait to find out what these rules are! Keep it up!
person Annika
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think the direction you