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you made my day, I love this story

Awesome!!! Snape and Remus sitting in a tree!!!! So cute!!! Full moon is soon right? A little Teddy wolf playing will be so cute!!!!

I liked that image of a borscht-colored Remus, when he was talking to Hermione. And Severus is so observant and thoughtful

Am I still reading? Of course! I am glad Harry is finally chilling the hell out and that you showed such an intimate moment between Severus and Remus at the end of chapter 33. Maybe Severus will see how much Remus likes Severus for himself at some point soon.

We will get to find out what happens next...right? I'm sure you must be pretty busy, but, you know, if you get the chance to post anything soon, we'd love to read it...

It's so good to see Remus finally standing up to Harry! Nice touch the bonding healing Remus feet, I'm looking forward to seeing him moving on his own.

I am truly enjoying your story, I appreciate the regular updates (you did scare me with the late one----I was "oh no, don't drop it now"), I look forward to seeing more of how Teddy and Severus' relationship develops and would love to see Teddy tell Harry off. I did enjoy Remus finally speaking up and hoped that is where you were going with Harry showing up while Remus was doped on his healing potion.

Yay, lovely update!

I have yet to read a chapter of this story that I don't like! Or even one that seems off, unnatural, or out of character. Dialogue can be tricky and you've done it well. Snape and Harry have a bad history between them, yet they are both older and also outside of the professor/student setting, and are actually able to have a deeper, more open conversation - though tension is still high and tempers short. It's a sort of balance, and it's well-written. I did not see that ending coming at all - Snape hinting at actually wanting Harry to keep checking up on them, not just to be a friend for Remus and Teddy but to hold Snape accountable because he's still afraid he'll start abusing his power. Between that and Remus's talk with Harry (go Remus!!), it seems like Harry & co.'s visits will be more predictable and settled now, instead of being so random and disruptive. Hermione's calm inquisitiveness tempers Harry's brash accusations well. He's been a real jerk so far, but from his perspective that's warranted. We just get the story of Severus and Remus' little fledgling relationship, which just gets better all the time, and so Harry seems so irritatingly obnoxious. Nice that their visit provided us with a reason to get more details about the full moon plan, too. I always wish the chapters were longer...but I'm glad you're updating as regularly as you are! This has become my favorite happy fictional world to get lost in. Who needs a good rom-com when you've got perfectly-done Snupin, right? :)

p.s. I'm definitely mentally labeling Harry's fond remembering look (in response to Snape's comment) as a Drarry reference. That was a fun little allusion :)

I read chapter 31 when you posted it but never commented on it, so I reread again today. This story continues to be a favorite of mine, and this chapter was so sweet :) It