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So that was a good chapter but I am very anxious to see if Severus will assure Remus that Sebastian is just a friend whatever Sebastian might wish. At least that's what I'm hoping the situation is. Teddy continues to be the world's child with mostest!

A new chapter!! This totally made my day. :D
Interesting how you did that, introducing a new character without discontinuity because of the whole door-fixing job which was already established. I definitely like Sebastian; Remus needs some friends and Sebastian seems like a likely candidate. But now I really want to know how this conversation goes, about all that relationship stuff! I can't wait to see how Severus responds and where it all leads...this is the problem with serial novels, you always have to wait in suspense. Ah well...on the other hand, it lasts longer, and I do rather like spending time in the world of this story you've created. But we will get the next bit soon? I know a week is probably a bit much to ask for, but a month feels so long.... Dear writer, do keep writing! It's like having to eat a delicious chocolate cake one bite at a time, in five minute intervals.

I have been really enjoying your story, it is one of the few I currently check just to see if it has updated. I am starting to worry, I hope you are well and just have been to busy, but please.....it is not nice to get someone addicted and then cut them off. Again let me tell you how very much I am enjoying the story and that I am looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Lynda

I know life gets busy, and we readers have been quite spoiled with your quick updates in the past, but...
There will be more...right?

This is an amazing story! I love how the characters have developed, how Snape and Remus are becoming friends (rather than pretending they always had feeling for each other, even when they were kids, like other lazy stories do. I love when people stick to the books, and only take a minimal amount of creative license, and work around that existing storyline. You really know what you are doing as an author. Love it!

I was rereading old chapters today and had a thought - can Remus use his magic now? Since the bond has happened, and the rules say nothing against it? Just wondering.

I really liked this chapter. It was oddly soothing by the end of it.

I like when we get surprised by our stories. It is strange how that happens, you think "oh I have this idea" and when you start it's fine and then "BAM!" it morphs, twists and then rebuilds itself, all without a ton of forethought. Your writing style is nice because I can feel as I read it. Love that. And I have found that chapters that get away from you sometimes end up being the gems of the story. I can't wait for more.

Very emotional chapter...more than usual. So glad Severus could come up with something so quickly to prevent that inspector from taking Remus for the night or doing something else horrible. I don't think he can do that every time though. They will wonder why all inspectors to that house end up with headaches even though the house passes inspection easily. Maybe Harry can tell him why the inspector's name seems familiar.

OMG you had me crying thinking that Sev would let that shit ass that Remus...so glad he did what he did to the guys mind...sure hope he does not get in any problems for it...someone needs to tell Harry so maybe he an do something !!!!!!!!! loved the update and hike see more soon !!!!!!!

Another great chapter! You're very good at keeping us on the edge of our seats! I was afraid for Teddy and Remus for a bit there! It's such a well-written story, and I love how you're keeping it interesting! Keep it up! (I also appreciate how you snuck a little sexy time in there!)