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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Kat
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Can't wait for the full moon.
person starr
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow hope next time is the full moon and all goes well with it....poor Teddie that guy that had him sure was an ass....BTW thanks for the update and waiting for the next one ):):):)):):):):)):):):):)
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 1, this is fairly interesting!
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two: This is bloody brilliant, I am impressed!
person Annika
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, full moon day! I was beginning to wonder about how many days it had been since they'd arrived.
This was quite the snazzy little chapter. Sex & sweetness & suspense all in one!
There were a number of little proofreading things - leaving a few words out, etc - but that hardly matters. I'm just glad we only had to wait a few weeks for the update! [Which, by the way, was chapter 40, not 41...I think you may have mislabeled it...]

I hope you get a chance to write the next installment soon!!

p.s. wolfish Remus is ridiculously hot in bed. ohh, the growling...mmm...
person ChaosLady
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
An interesting chapter. Update soon, I can't wait for the full moon.
person MrEQuecky
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome updates, trally loved the new chapters! Is there a chance you will be posting on Archive of our own as well?
person Annika
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now for an actual review:

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person ChaosLady
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful update!
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very happy to find another chapter for me to read as I have neither abandoned it nor am I finding it longwinded :) Loved reading Severus' back story, especially concerning Fred as I had wondered where he fit in (really love Fred btw).